they are very generous ppl and i accept this award with humbleness
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two words
heart beats
life skips
eyes meet
words rhyme
love sings
she speaks
fool jumps
hand holds
lost souls
her eyes
she lies
fool cries
vows new
splits wide
two words
good bye
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Just curious – are you using Fool in a pejorative manner? Interesting style choice, very dualistic. I like the slim nature of the poem.
crb.
thank CRB
the reference to being fool is not in a negative tone..just as one becomes a fool in love and blinded by his visions or image of the person.
Slim nature…. hahahahahaha
Cheers!!!
EXCELLENT !!!! i voted tooo
hehehehehehe thanks rash
Your poem is like a quick step. I danced all the way through it.
thank u kristen :d
Thanks for taking the award…
as a matter of fact, I do feel tired, I just got up from a one hour napping…
best of wishes for everything.
love your poem,
crispy and cool rhythms.
thanks jingle and accepting the award is just a formality truly happy that you appreciate the work…
Cheers to a jingling wonderful person Jiyan Wu
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COOL!!!! Loved it!
Congrats and such a cool poem, almost like a song š xxx
So beautiful and the ending took me by surprise.. liked it so much.. thanks for sharing…
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thanks shashi….
Yep, this got my vote.
thank u so much penelope š Cheers!!!
perfect and am glad you wrote this š God bless
I really like how you did this…two words! Would be fun to try.
thank u š
Very interesting poem you’ve got here. I love the way you use just two words on each line and yet so volumes! Amazing work!
thanku Dp88
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