two words

Posted: September 29, 2010 in beloved, helpless, loved ones, Romance
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they are very generous ppl and i accept this award with humbleness


two words

heart beats
life skips
eyes meet
words rhyme
love sings
she speaks
fool jumps
hand holds
lost souls
her eyes
she lies
fool cries
vows new
splits wide
two words
good bye

  1. Just curious – are you using Fool in a pejorative manner? Interesting style choice, very dualistic. I like the slim nature of the poem.


    • thank CRB
      the reference to being fool is not in a negative tone..just as one becomes a fool in love and blinded by his visions or image of the person.

      Slim nature…. hahahahahaha

  2. rash says:

    EXCELLENT !!!! i voted tooo

  3. Your poem is like a quick step. I danced all the way through it.

  4. Jingle says:

    Thanks for taking the award…

    as a matter of fact, I do feel tired, I just got up from a one hour napping…
    best of wishes for everything.

  5. Jingle says:

    love your poem,
    crispy and cool rhythms.

  6. Jingle says:

    Glad to see you in…
    have fun visiting!

  7. buttercup600 says:

    Congrats and such a cool poem, almost like a song 🙂 xxx

  8. Shashi says:

    So beautiful and the ending took me by surprise.. liked it so much.. thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay

  9. penelopephoebe says:

    Yep, this got my vote.

  10. megha says:

    perfect and am glad you wrote this 🙂 God bless

  11. I really like how you did this…two words! Would be fun to try.

  12. deadpoet88 says:

    Very interesting poem you’ve got here. I love the way you use just two words on each line and yet so volumes! Amazing work!

  13. dj says:

    awesome! super-duper-bumper LIKE 🙂

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