ayodhya
removed the old… placed creed and caste over it
fought with brothers and killed our sisters
slayed the young and bled the elders
the men who become gods
whose temple and mosques they want to build
had given a message clear to all who heard their prayer
live like one and love equal to all
cheers of my caste, symbols of my motherland
what came first is the race here
have not learned, humans we have to be first
cheer for love and not the kill
guns fire and swords slay to break
lives destroyed are not easy to create
ask the 18 year old who still weeps for his father
dead he was the day they destroyed
practice your faith live your vows
say no more
no more of this bullshit
we the people shall not fight
people will come together to build a new school
school of thoughts which preach human rights
human beings around me lets start being human
create a world where we live without fear.
three parts equal
as we were now we shall be one
hope they have learned their lesson
people aren’t fools anymore, politicians please do hear
we want to be one don’t make the gullible ones suffer
peace we shall have
land of our gods will be happy
flowers will bloom and boards will be removed
bravo judiciary you made em all proud
Nicely written poem, enjoyed it very much!
thank u marinela ….u the 1st one to comment on this and it makes me feel happy 😀
Cheers!!!
I too wish the “bullshit” would stop…but in the meantime, we must protect ourselves from those who refuse to listen 🙂
ya…good that people dint get carried away and the politicians i hope have learned a lesson…
Cheers!!!
NIce one AShu, really…
thanks punit…
nice one ashu…
thank u fiola 😀
i am so happy and proud for the maturity displayed by indians this time. i was very worried. extremely worried. it turned out dreamlike.
ya thank god that ppl have matured 😀
Your situation there is so complex, and I wouldn’t pretend to understand it … I appreciate the values and concerns you express here, Wise. I also must say that it was wonderful on Indian Independance day the way so many bloggers blogged their pride and their unity … It was inspiring and heartwarming “mature” as Trisha would say …
I like to believe that everywhere in the world, in the end, true human values will out …
Fine poem, well wrought and well considered with a good flow to it …
thanks jamie… the poem reflects more of what had happened in 1992-93 today the citizens arent falling to the politicians shit… thank u so much for paying attention to our cause 😀
cheers!!!
Cheers! 🙂
cheers!!!
Every indian should read your poem and remember its words, when we are provoked next time we should say that tempter to get lost forever.
thanks trisha….. Jai ho!
This is sweet,
well done,
keep smiling, carry pride of your mother land.
cheers.
xxx
cheers!!! JI
Strong words.. even stronger emotions!! I concur with each word u said, man!!
Good stuff!
thank u kavitaaaa
Nice write, powerful words so often unheard. May we continue to speak them lest they be heard.
jai ho reflections!!!
Cheers!!!
love this!
hey five glad u stopped by and cheers!!
well written. Keep writing…..
thanks shail and thank u for the support
Its beautiful… I am from the place and could feel it all alive.. thanks for sharing.
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oh thanks a lot shashi 😀
Beautiful…A great message is displayed through your poem…
Thank you for sharing this… 🙂
thanks sumit… it was great to see the whole of india gave a mesg back to the politicians when the judgment came out
Cheers!!!