i want to say…

Posted: August 23, 2012 in Uncategorized

Every time i think of you i wanna say something
I end up saying stupid and non-conclusive words
Not only when i am lonely
Even in a crowd i am suddenly struck by thoughts about you
Its like i am stuck on you.

Consciously i have tried to get you off my mind
But that just never happens no matter how hard i try
Every song any remotely romantic word i hear
The moron in my brain starts to paint your picture
Trust me mind and heart both are at mutiny with reality
For the truth is you don’t want to be with me but they keep fighting endlessly with destiny

What can i say
I have fallen short of words and ideas
Repeat the same mistakes everyday
I guess this is my truth which will remain false for you
If not in this life maybe in next what i say will have a meaning for you.




  1. sharp…

    being shy is normal reactions …
    love the vivid imagery.

  2. A little sad and I can feel the struggle of thoughts. Enjoyed the flow in the thoughts!

  3. A sad situation. If it was meant to be, it would be. In the mean time, embrace the beauty of life, that is living. πŸ™‚


  4. systematicweasel says:

    Some days are more of a struggle than others. You’ve crafted a great piece.

  5. shail says:

    I liked the last five lines especially. Nice.

  6. Mish Foster says:

    awesome composition.

  7. Green Speck says:

    Wow … such a powerful rendition of love !!!

  8. elizena says:

    Sad, but very well written. Sometimes our hearts choose someone to love and that person doesn’t deserve how much we love them, but the heart loves who the heart loves and all we can do is live with it.
    Thanks so much for sharing. Enjoy the rest of your week! πŸ˜‰


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