In Deeds

Posted: February 4, 2012 in beloved, universe

Exchange my life I never would need
I thought so
Brutal break in my thesis I never dreamt indeed

What one needs is to be loved
I gave so
Pushed me to extreme I couldnt swim back in speed

Fortunate I have the reason to live
Thankful so
Questions raised answer I could give but innocence would bleed

Hate I have to live with
Punished so
Tried all that my heart could beat but you also broke the spirit

  1. Summer Rain says:

    lovely logic and reasoning.

  2. ~L says:

    felt this one deep! Great poem… really deep and raw!


  3. kez says:

    Cool and with depth and cool sense …thank you x

  4. Hema says:

    Well said! Love does lead us to extremes…

  5. Jennifaye says:

    “What one needs is to be loved” — so true!

  6. becca givens says:

    last line is gut wrenching!!

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