I need you…

Posted: August 18, 2011 in beloved, deep notions, loved ones, Romance

What we want is what we get
We just dont know what to do after that
Longing is different from what wants are.

Asking someone to change is strange
For you wouldnt be there if you dint like in the first place
Choice we always have but we still want more.

Please please me
Never wanting to be in back seat
Controll freak is what we have become.

Sorry but its about me
No you idiot others can have human errors
Perfect neither are you neither is any living being.

I pull this rleationship
It could also be true all can be just nice
Mirror is what we need for one has to see

I need to be heard
Sorry others have voices too
others also need to be loved you see

  1. powerful expressions,

    well done.


  2. wordcoaster says:

    Love the first stanza here–very profound. A bit of proofreading would help the rest 🙂

  3. I agree, we have evolved into a me-first generation. One-track, my-way-or-the-highway. Very well said. Good writing.

    Here is my offering for this first Gooseberry Garden picnic: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/this-eden/

  4. Morning says:

    brilliant insights, thanks for sharing…

    Happy Poetry Picnic!

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