I am what I am
Iam what I want to be
I am what I need to be
What I will not be
Is what you want from me
Like the tide
Will rise high
Will not stop even if you feed your ideas to me
I am what I am
Definition you can try to write
My will would destroy the stereotype
Like the wind
Will blow it
Will not stop even if you block my paths
I am what I am
Creator of my fate
Maker of my path
Standing tall in front of you all
I am my own karma
Your curses defended
Your tricks mangled
Try you may again and again
Your wicked wishes and methods will meet their end
I am what I am
Definitions destroy me
Maker of my fate
Defender of my paths created
Help me win this and we shall be friends in this life and next.
love the imagery here, well done.
keep it up.
thanks for linking.
Interesting first line and it reflects “I am that I am”
You should be what you want to be you should have that choice.
Your will is strong although submissiveness is necessary.
Your will is strong! “My will would destroy the stereotype”
Your fate and your path are you own.
Your friend.
Genebrother
This is written as an inspiration from Lord Shiva š cheers friend iM glad u liked it
direct and lovely.
thanks for sharing.
š
friends at last,
love the ending….
Raw Spirit power! This poem expresses deep strength! Bless!
Very similar topics to my poem for this week.. http://wordpowersound.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/what-i-am-isis-what-i-ami-am-is-whatam-i-what-is/
Keep it up.
Beautiful and vivid writing. Nicely done!
My offering this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/
It is an irony that the more I seek to identify who I am the more fragile I am likely to feel about myself…Good work buddy!!
Oh…. Liked the idea of ‘definitions destroy me’… Lots of food for thought in this one! *smile*
Thank you for such an inspirational affirmation of self. Blessings.
Brilliant writing edifying a strong sense of character which establishes a strong message for the reader. Wonderful!
Very profound theme in your poem. i enjoyed reading it.
Love this message and love the poem. excellent entry!
One of my recent offerings: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/
A very strong poem – I loved it š
This is wonderful. A friend of mine wrote a poem of I am and this one is so well done and a lot different than hers. I am happy to read this. My entry this week is http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html
powerful piece…
Hohoho,
What charming poetry you have posted here.
Invite you to share 1 to 3 poems with us, anything could fit the theme of object,
Cheers.
Hope to see you in.
Happy Writing..
xoxox
Very strong in the sense that you are strong yourself, spiritually. Thank you for sharing!
Erick Flores
powerful self expressions.
Glad to see you share.