I am…

Posted: August 10, 2011 in Uncategorized, universe, warriror


I am what I am

Iam what I want to be

I am what I need to be

What I will not be

Is what you want from me

Like the tide

Will rise high

Will not stop even if you feed your ideas to me

I am what I am

Definition you can try to write

My will would destroy the stereotype

Like the wind

Will blow it

Will not stop even if you block my paths

I am what I am

Creator of my fate

Maker of my path

Standing tall in front of you all

I am my own karma

Your curses defended

Your tricks mangled

Try you may again and again

Your wicked wishes and methods will meet their end

I am what I am

Definitions destroy me

Maker of my fate

Defender of my paths created

Help me win this and we shall be friends in this life and next.

  1. Jingle says:

    love the imagery here, well done.

    keep it up.

    thanks for linking.

  2. genebrother says:

    Interesting first line and it reflects “I am that I am”

    You should be what you want to be you should have that choice.
    Your will is strong although submissiveness is necessary.
    Your will is strong! “My will would destroy the stereotype”
    Your fate and your path are you own.
    Your friend.

  3. direct and lovely.

    thanks for sharing.


  4. friends at last,

    love the ending….

  5. Derek says:

    Raw Spirit power! This poem expresses deep strength! Bless!
    Very similar topics to my poem for this week.. http://wordpowersound.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/what-i-am-isis-what-i-ami-am-is-whatam-i-what-is/

    Keep it up.

  6. Beautiful and vivid writing. Nicely done!

    My offering this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/

  7. antomaniax says:

    It is an irony that the more I seek to identify who I am the more fragile I am likely to feel about myself…Good work buddy!!

  8. CC Champagne says:

    Oh…. Liked the idea of ‘definitions destroy me’… Lots of food for thought in this one! *smile*

  9. Miss Kitten says:

    Thank you for such an inspirational affirmation of self. Blessings.

  10. Kay Salady says:

    Brilliant writing edifying a strong sense of character which establishes a strong message for the reader. Wonderful!


  11. dandylion28 says:

    Very profound theme in your poem. i enjoyed reading it.

  12. Love this message and love the poem. excellent entry!

    One of my recent offerings: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/

  13. Caledoniapoems says:

    A very strong poem – I loved it šŸ˜‰

  14. This is wonderful. A friend of mine wrote a poem of I am and this one is so well done and a lot different than hers. I am happy to read this. My entry this week is http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.html

  15. powerful piece…


    What charming poetry you have posted here.

    Invite you to share 1 to 3 poems with us, anything could fit the theme of object,

    Hope to see you in.

    Happy Writing..

  16. Erick Flores says:

    Very strong in the sense that you are strong yourself, spiritually. Thank you for sharing!

    Erick Flores

  17. powerful self expressions.
    Glad to see you share.

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