Time pulls and it gives
Wish everyone a gun to hold it ransom
Try a finger pointing to you Defenses will be at peaks
I cant give you advice
I am stricken worst then you
I cant be I if you never had We
Long and short of life it stands
Emotional waves tie up the one in you
Release is conditional and try in vain we all had
Ask me if I wanted too
Reasons zillions but answers to zits
Smoke is with a fire and yet here I stand with ashes
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“Smoke is with a fire and yet here I stand with ashes” you did well and had a very strong ending hope to see you next rally
the title impresses me. keep it up.
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To me this poem is like still water with a rough undercurrent. There’s more pain than meets the eye, and there are so many different forms of pain that it will always catch us when we least expect it.
I love the title and the poem.
thanks ZIM
Art with ashes…lovely…
Thank you ankush….. Do stop by soon
some wisdom in your words, well done.
A++
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