Questions into affermation

Posted: April 9, 2011 in helpless, loved ones, thoughts
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Little less of conversation helps find the answeres
Questions asked in rage are more of complications
Solutions to problematic situations have thoughtless calculations

Knowing to love is barrierless egoistic projections
Being hated needs no foolish behaviour just a brain with complications
To be liked we need to like others with their behavourial ramifications

Drops of water make ripples like doubt creates aimless accusisions
Love aint blind it just needs thoughts expressed by executions
If I ever asked then would mean your love needs explanations

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Comments
  1. Jingle says:

    wow, amazing thoughts..

    love all the beautiful metaphors.
    cheers.

    welcome in, Happy Rally.
    ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. mypastmademe says:

    Wow! My fave part: ‘Being hated needs no foolish behaviour just a brain with complications, To be liked we need to like others with their behavourial ramifications’. Great, enjoyed reading it, thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. wow! great poem….favorite line is.. “Love aint blind it just needs thoughts expressed by executions.”

  4. -D says:

    Less is more. Loved the first line. Nice work! ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Stafford says:

    Yes, I smiled at the wit of this. And I agree that questions asked in anger are not really questions but accusations. BUT a calm ‘why do you say that?’ can elucidate.

  6. Vinay says:

    I like your opening verse best, and the couplet that starts I agree with wholeheartedly! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Rally Week 41 – My Poetry

  7. J.R. says:

    I love the rhythm that you have going on in this poem. Great word choice!
    J.R.

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