Emotions on a note

Posted: February 9, 2011 in Uncategorized
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Music has meaning for its not right when its musing
Common agenda has a tune in for everyone knows when to talk
Feel alone I do too when they talk about  common sight seeing

 

 

Same peaks and waves we have witnessed

Sadly I saw through the sun lit glass muriels
Viewrs you or I,  godly have been my percievings

Spliffingly gorgeous afternoons
Nights never having endings for mornings were never seen
Friends to hold life ransoms at what were they planing to rob with.

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Comments
  1. Chimnese says:

    music is always connected to our emotions..we play certain music according what we feel…i really liked this write..

    here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/02/wait-we-waited-for-this-day-to-have.html

  2. Jingle says:

    love your views on friends and life,

    life is an illusion mostly,

    beautiful poetry, Happy Rally!
    Glad to see you in.
    🙂

  3. Kavita says:

    those last 2 lines really hit hard…
    But each line in the poem seemed to talk of a different emotion… some subtle, some not…

    well done, AJ!!

  4. I love making up words and, well… spliffingly is awesome. 🙂

    My Poet’s Rally post: Imbiciles Turn Criminal

  5. fiveloaf says:

    great and lovely.. i can understand your english also! just in case you have not been, here’s my week 38 haha! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

  6. Rashmi says:

    Enjoyed reading eventhough sad one…
    the last stanza is wonderful…

    • Th ank u rashmi for stopping by… Tho I dint intend it to be sad….. Its an expression of how sometimes we each see things a different way yet enjoy and with friends all is fun and the last stanza is for the troubles in life…. Challenging them with the help of frnds

  7. -D says:

    nice work 🙂

  8. The line “Spliffingly gorgeous afternoons” might convey more perfectly that perfection of immoderate vicissitudes than any other phrase I have read in a long time. Tip o’ the cap. Loved the poem as a whole but that really tied everything together.

    crb.

  9. Poets Rally says:

    Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

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