love you miles

Posted: January 9, 2011 in beloved

Miles goes her smile
happy and love is the distance

miles long seems the doorway
sad for shes not here

miles away i can hear
longing you always dear

miles speed comes her warmth
in her arms i wanna die hearing her hearts sound

miles and miles may come
baby no matter how far i will run to kiss g’nite

  1. Harshika says:

    very sweet and romantic

  2. Bodhirose says:

    Sounds like a very devoted lover missing his beloved. Lovely…

  3. Jingle says:

    super smart piece, sweet sentiments…

    linked you in, kind of lat, so doubled your chance to get some feedback..

    have fun!

    Thanks a lot for the lovely contribution..

  4. Dear and romantic. Lovely contribution to Rally.

    Happy days …

  5. Lisa says:

    How romantic! Nice!

  6. Awww, so lovely and romantic! Makes me wanna snuggle!

  7. Jingle says:

    How are you?

    Please keep in mind to:

    #1: return favor to poets who visited you
    #2: complete 18 comments to your peers…or fresh poets to explore..

    Thanks for the lovely contribution, it is fun when everyone gets the job done…
    Happy Tuesday!


  8. Hera says:

    beautiful.. just beautiful

  9. LeiffyV says:

    Very romantic, passionate and with a touch of adoration mixed in. A perfect ode to one you love.

  10. Short Poems says:

    Simply beautiful… keep it up your work 🙂

  11. Linn says:

    Wow, how sweet is this! 🙂 Thanks for sharing it.

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  13. Sumit Sarkar says:

    So sweet…
    miles and miles may come…amazing 🙂

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