River through the gates

Posted: January 3, 2011 in helpless, random, thoughts
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flows calmly in time of the chills
let the sun be clouded and it comes with frills
roaring makes the sound when water meets the gates

never ever it disturbs nor it perturbs
soothing always from far no matter the season
sun sparkles its way like shimmering gold in a tray

river has no definite beginning
like thoughts from a fools deep persuasive meanings
wise and spiritual meanings made from its path winding

runs straight never always twisting
compare life or your thoughts it will always give you an ending
but never a source like there was no beginning yet always an understanding

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Comments
  1. Jingle says:

    flows calmly in time of the chills
    let the sun be clouded and it comes with frills

    your word fulfills,
    timeless imagery… well done…

    visit poets from the list and have fun….
    Thanks for the support.

  2. I liked this poem…especially the lines:

    “river has no definite beginning
    like thoughts from a fools deep persuasive meanings
    wise and spiritual meanings made from its path winding”

    Thought provoking piece…thank you for sharing.

  3. aynsley7 says:

    This piece sounded GOOD. It’s a solid sounding poem that is like fudge.
    Yummy poem!

  4. LoLa says:

    compare life or your thoughts it will always give you an ending
    but never a source like there was no beginning yet always an understanding

    I love this, such an interesting thought. Where does it begin, when we look back it is not always clear to us.

  5. Kavita says:

    Wow.. this, acc. to me was one of your best!!! The title immediately reminded me of Pink Floyd’s Piper at the gates of dawn πŸ™‚
    “sun sparkles its way like shimmering gold in a tray” — my fav. line!! Very rich in imagery…

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  7. chamz says:

    inspirational piece πŸ™‚

  8. marit says:

    i like the bit about rivers having no beginnings

  9. Jessica says:

    A great journey of a poem, really enjoyed it.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/17/rain/

  10. yelena m. says:

    I have a feeling from this poem that some beautiful impressionistic paintings awake in me…Thanks for sharing this beauty. πŸ™‚

  11. Jingle says:

    artistic and visual, well done.

    πŸ™‚

  12. Gorgeous poem love the imagery =)

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