Change in me is righteous
The look in your eyes of admiration is brightest
Glitters my soul with love
Compassion and passion nurtured you have in me
Fountain sprinkling emotions
Taught me to rhyme words with amore and adore
Inspiration to me mature
Journey through your eyes with our hands holding tight
Time knows no goodbye
Flying carpet like has been this blossoming life ride
Sin purged off me for forgiven I am cause you love me
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creative, so cool piece.
keep shining.
thank u Ji
I love this poem…
Beautiful 🙂
thanku sarkar 😀
Cheers!!!
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Beautiful Stuff
Here’s my poetry
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/love-is/
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thanks ashbee
I enjoyed the composition of the piece, the way the lines were separated created movement along with the sing song lyrics
thank u shamika really glad u enjoyed this post 😀
Love the format here!
thank u Fraye
Fantastic flow and the arrangement was just totally trippy! Great write!
thanks thomas
Liked it:)
thanks anand
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do as many as you can…
The syntax is rather unusual- what was the thought behind that?
the arrangement of the words is something i never do deliberately just write the way i feel….
thanks for stopping by Seaglass Cheers!!!
Hmm…I’d be wary of actually obscuring meaning, though- ‘never sacrifice clarity’ is a mantra of mine. Maybe break some of the lines up?
sure seaglass will keep your mantra in mind next time, but i am a random guy a definition destroys me 😀
Cheers!!!
I enjoyed reading this because of it uniqueness “time knows no goodbye” 😀
nice
thanks a lot jaclyn i seriously feel from ur comments that u took the same ride as i did when i write this stuff 😀
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