Posted: December 7, 2010 in deep notions, helpless, insane, random, thoughts
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Puffing on and exhaling smoke
looking out the window on a dark hour
yellow glow on black streets and a cold breeze
no reason why face has a smile as if it heard a joke

no one walks this hour lonely few drive past
maybe sum1 else notices this yellow glow too
going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise
even the crows asleep like all humans and stars falling fast

alone almost in thoughts of those who are and were
perceptions so fascinating  the night seems to glow of memories
many such nights have been seen but this time its in pasts reflections
words cant point to one person its just pondering of worldly revolutions i bear

expressions have formed logistics too cause they really move
transporting emotions to drive the gray matter in past present mode
seriously even logic’s like these make sense now for brain process alone better
scary ride this time for i fear when it will all stop and would need help to give it a tow.

  1. Kavita says:

    ohhh.. quite a chilling one, W.. that ride down memory lane (in this sepia mode) really makes one feel the lull of the moment… nice written, i must say!

    “going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise” – loved this line!

  2. Jingle says:

    going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise..

    so true.
    Thrilled to have you in.
    Happy Potluck!


  3. Sumit Sarkar says:

    beautiful words 🙂

  4. KB says:

    I love the colour in the pic. Such a lonely scene, looks and feels like the world has stood still.

  5. Jingle says:

    Please consider link in 1 to 3 poems to Jingle Poetry Potluck week 14.
    We are open and will remain open for about 23 hours from now and appreciate your submission today…

    any poems are welcome.

    your talent rocks.
    share your poetry today,
    stay blessed.

    how are you?

  6. Jingle says:

    Glad to have your lovely work shared with fellow poets.
    Happy Thursday!


  7. Jingle says:

    Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
    At this time of the year, We wish you all the best !
    Link a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

  8. elisajoy says:

    haven’t visited your blog in awhile. it was nice to catch up and read some good poetry.

  9. meirozavian says:

    Awesome…. I love it!!

    Happy new year.

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