
Puffing on and exhaling smoke
looking out the window on a dark hour
yellow glow on black streets and a cold breeze
no reason why face has a smile as if it heard a joke
no one walks this hour lonely few drive past
maybe sum1 else notices this yellow glow too
going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise
even the crows asleep like all humans and stars falling fast
alone almost in thoughts of those who are and were
perceptions so fascinating the night seems to glow of memories
many such nights have been seen but this time its in pasts reflections
words cant point to one person its just pondering of worldly revolutions i bear
expressions have formed logistics too cause they really move
transporting emotions to drive the gray matter in past present mode
seriously even logic’s like these make sense now for brain process alone better
scary ride this time for i fear when it will all stop and would need help to give it a tow.
ohhh.. quite a chilling one, W.. that ride down memory lane (in this sepia mode) really makes one feel the lull of the moment… nice written, i must say!
“going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise” – loved this line!
i am glad you had the same perception of what i was trying to say in these words here 😀
Cheers!!!
going to west is the moon and east ready for another rise..
so true.
Thrilled to have you in.
Happy Potluck!
A+
B+ 😉
cheers!!!
(thts me blood type too)
Marvelous..
beautiful words 🙂
thanks a ton sumit
I love the colour in the pic. Such a lonely scene, looks and feels like the world has stood still.
krazy unfortunately the pic is not taken by me… but iam glad u liked it 🙂
lovely image
thanks Prutha
Please consider link in 1 to 3 poems to Jingle Poetry Potluck week 14.
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Glad to have your lovely work shared with fellow poets.
Happy Thursday!
🙂
thank u ji
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Great.
thanks gregor
Greetings!
Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!
End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
At this time of the year, We wish you all the best !
Link a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!
haven’t visited your blog in awhile. it was nice to catch up and read some good poetry.
thank u lill beauty…
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Awesome…. I love it!!
Happy new year.
thank u meiro, happy new year !!!