Time freeze wish I could

Posted: December 2, 2010 in beloved, helpless, insane, loved ones, Romance, thoughts
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Should not have to be like this everytime we meet

How would it be if it was not reflected in the ripples of sea

Beginning to let go not me for I did that in times of “when eyes meet”


Warm breezes from whispers formed of words of those rainbow shaped lips

Drama wish I could do to hold you more ..for more time in these arms untied

Feel like I have been here before for imagination I have deep and overpowering


Standing there watching you go bye like a poets sad rhymes

Make believe my in words for these aren’t wisdoms of a fool with extreme insights

Simple ways of telling you how much I love the way you stay longer and don’t want to stay goodbye


Lost in the moments when you hugged with a deep breath and almost sighed

Believe me I had to keep my eyes open to make sure this wasn’t a dream in broad daylight

You cushioned in my arms and hands hugged tight wish I could freeze time…….


Now I know how frustrating it is to not have control over time

Wish I could freeze these minutes and make them into days of a thousand years

Wishing control for time many have asked for there are moments we wish where time would freeze.

  1. Kavita says:

    very nice! so many times, we feel why is it that time has to move ahead… how much more better can it get? Why does this very moment have to change? Couldn’t it just remain the same ?
    Wonderfully expressed here in poetic form, wise.. makes so much sense…
    “rainbow shaped lips” – loved this one!! sounds really sweet 🙂
    I really really like the 2nd last stanza..

    I remember writing something on these lines a while back.. not a poem though..
    here it is: http://kavisionz.wordpress.com/2009/10/05/living-in-a-time-dead-world/

  2. Sumit Sarkar says:

    Time freeze….
    Nicely done…I loved it 🙂

  3. Jingle says:

    beautiful imagery.
    well done.

  4. suzicate says:

    being able to freeze time is a wonderful dream!

  5. eugenicist says:

    Aww…I superlike this one 🙂

  6. Talon says:

    Yes, there are definitely those moments we wish could last for eternity…

  7. Scent of my heart says:

    I have these moments too, but you know sometimes the only thing that freezes is the river because of the snow and the cold, though I never give up, and you shouldn’t either! Nice post, thanks for posting it!

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  10. “Wish I could freeze these minutes and make them into days of a thousand years”


  11. ~L says:

    this was great:) i really enjoyed! i even read it twice;)

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