i dont wana be a statesman
i wonder how i even stand
i can be longer wish it had no end
words to write fill my mind
wish someday i could go blank
wish so do u if i would ever stop and mend
rethink redo rework
re-read every rhyme literately unfolds my mind
i write as i feel i write with a heart nauseatingly everytime
three words or less in crowd
four words make a rhyme
fifth added so it can be defined
see what i have been through you will feel divine
good bye baby, not forever in the end
makes sense here in this life
prerogative provocative rhymes in 3 or 4 lines
fool you are to understand for you think you know who i am
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I enjoyed the flow of this piece. Has me thinking about the forms I use in writing. Thanks!
thank u markee glad that this could be trip in the past for u 😀
thanks for the contribution,
one poem a week now so that you need not to comment under stress..
skillful word flow.
lovely imagery..
thank u for de-stressing condition 😛
heheheheheh thanks Ji u rock!!!
Happy Rally,
18 would be enough for you to smile…
thanks for the egg comment,
I am full so far from looking at it.
😉
i wana see a picture of you ji … you rock super rock 😀
Nice flow! Keep it up!
Kudos!
Love lots,
B
BTW, here’s my entry for this week.
Hope you like it too!
MOVING ON AND LETTING GO
HAPPY RALLY!
thanks philip 🙂
hahaha
that’s weird.
People rarely address me using my Real name.
hahaha
Thanks!
😀 alrite then B it is Cheers!!!
How are ya man!…like you said at the end… can’t understand till I know Ya! 🙂
@2zpoint – me been good …thanks and cheers!!!
Words chosen beautifully and weaved to form a poem
thank u uma, Cheers!!!
An interesting read…
Thanks for sharing,
Peace to you,
(My entry for the rally)
thanks jeff 😀
I enjoyed this loads! You have so much abstract meaning and imagery in this. I think it’s beautiful, how you’ve twisted the phrases to suit your meaning. You’ve captured some brilliant rhythms and momentum in this piece; it’s dying to be read out loud. Great job.
thanks jessquah for reading it the way i wrote it 😀 Cheers!!!
Interesting writing style. =)
If you’re interested here’s my entry: Panda Wolf – Hey Rain, how are you feeling?
thanks panda 😀
I had to read this a couple of times and came to the conclusion that you’re one of those people I shouldn’t mess with. haha
Nice flow..
Here’s my post for Week 31
hahahaha miss Cheers!!!
mental exercise in a balmy day.
can’t say anything more than a good job for this one =]
-kyogakura
lolz kyoichi thanks a lot Cheers!!!
Oops!! revenge 😦 It made me scare!
Yet it was a pleasure to read.
Happy rally!
Lu Ann
naah Lu me not an angry poet 😀
thank u so much happy rally to u too
how is everything?
did you return favor to poets?
did you visit 18 poets New?
I am checking on everyone, hope that you get things done …
I always enjoyed your participation,
your poetry talent is unbeatable.
keep it up.
Happy Tuesday!
not as yet iam trying to read as many i can… surely will return the favors 😀
the words rolled off my tongue so fluently. i like poems that sounds good to the ear and are easy to read through, you know?
i don’t know if that makes sense, but basically I am saying, great job!
elisa thats the most nicest compliment ever… thank u thank u
Cheers!!!!
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this is tight (nikhil here)
thanks nikhil 😀