love in a cliche

Posted: September 12, 2010 in beloved, Romance
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standing below the curtained window

you looking like  Shakespearean delight

roses i bring same color everytime

for gorgeous red are your blushings

dont hide that smile

the blinking eyes give your secret away

for i know you love me on the inside

eyes dont lie and smiles bring back life

chocolates and gifts all that i have brought

time spent thinking what she might like

i know no other way to express my love

therefore iam being a cliche

cliche in words cliche in expressions but not a cliche at heart

for this love is for real believe me your not like the other girls

  1. Megha says:

    Beautiful as always ………..

  2. Jamie Dedes says:

    A sweet and lovely homage. If you wrote it with someone special in mind, I hope it is appreciated.

    I’m late finishing up on my Rally visits and looking for your Rally poem … will pursue further.

    Meanwhile, here is mine if you are so inclinded to spend the time …

  3. revbillcook says:

    I enjoyed this. Sometimes the clched things actually say it best! Nice. – bill

  4. siubhan says:

    aww. so sweet. what girl isn’t a sucker for red roses? 😉

  5. rash says:

    Roses , Chocolates,
    hmmmmm gud 1

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