Hero

Posted: September 10, 2010 in insane, universe, warriror
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On a cliff
with hands on his hip

amour braised and bruised
from wars with was and whos

hurt and pain for those
who stand in his ways
with a gentle warning

he announces to backdown

ones who standout are killed or maimed

plots so thick
like a twisted ring of fate
this farmers son now leads a kings brigade

conquering plains and heights with only a wish

to have this an end to go back in his beloveds den

swords are sharp
knives are thin blades

all strapped on his huge frame

rides his horse pushing away his fears
striking like Zeus’s bolt on his way
for they cant flee his reach is right to their soul

killer for some

conquer for few

leader to many
inspiration to his army

Hero to the history that’s new.

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Comments
  1. manish says:

    Well its good. Dont quite like the start though. but like how it ends.

  2. Jingle says:

    awesome….

    do you want to contribute this piece to my Rally week 27?

    let me know…

  3. fizzy says:

    i like the idea..i love the way it ends good work ashu!

  4. Anky0112 says:

    powerful…
    u described the hero very well…
    like the pat when u mention Zeus’s lighting bolt
    well written…
    is dat abhishek bacchan .. 1st pic (I don’t like him though).. its good he is facing back ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. ketaki says:

    beautifully depicted…..the depth of every word is filled with mystery…..good job …

  6. Jamie Dedes says:

    Happy Rally … Well done and you selected perfect pic’s to illustrate. Good job. Kudos!

  7. Hero to the history that’s new…everyday warriors now facing commutes!

  8. Jingle says:

    awesome portrayal of the hero…
    love the image, perfect piece.

  9. buttercup600 says:

    Perfection for our Potluck…loved the read and thanks so much for linking!! Hugs x

  10. tekia says:

    fille with emotion, great imagery and well written. bravo! enjoyed my read. really liked the line “like a twisted ring of fate, this farmer’s son now leads a king’s brigade.”

  11. Fantastic! I think this poem define the Hero Archetype better than most psychoanalysts!

    Bravo!

  12. Jamie Dedes says:

    As good the second time around as the first … that’s a good thing, Wise. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Thanks for a good submission to potluck.

  13. deadpoet88 says:

    Great poem, really enjoyed it…kind of like those fantasy stories we read. Amazing imagery as well! I have a fondness for fantasy, and stories about battles.

  14. I like the line “from wars with was and whos”…

  15. systematicweasel says:

    Wonderful potluck! =)

    -Weasel

  16. Shashi says:

    Yes a hero to many.. and I liked reading it…Thanks for sharing..

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