words that define
words that rhyme
words those are mine
words i am saying
words i have said
words that will be uttered
if they are shaped by my lips
then they are my prenomonation
when said for me
deciphers my head with verbs
for not always words follow with actions
words that hurt
words that care
words i use to pray
words i use to betray
words so blunt that make dents
if they shaped by my lips
then its my punishments
when said by me
hearts cryout abstracts
for they are hurt just wish i had a prayer
words for love
words for care
words i hear
words i need to hear
words so beautiful that make me gay
if they shaped by her lips
then its my divine plan
when said to me
pulse race to a beat
for her rhythmic divine fills my life with every chord to note
words make words but its us who define them.
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excellent flow of your words.
apt poem.
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smart move,
scan participants list,
have fun reading others….
Happy Thursday!
🙂
good one 😀
this poem is really good when it’s done in spoken word, (i read it outloud cuz in my head it didn’t read as well), I met a guy that used to go to poetry “slams” who had a similar style, you should try it out, they’re pretty big on college campuses
I dig the flow of your words.
Words are beautiful things that can do so much damage…
Strange,
Peace
awesome ending there 🙂
words are words, its how we define them that matter 🙂
our perceptions to words and expressions are wat matter 🙂
m here from Jingle’s rally…
you can read my rally poem at
I like the beat you’ve got going through this one–and a tight flow.
“words make words but its us who define them.” ~It is so true. Words have power, great deals of power–but only so long as we let them.
@ jingle thanks once again
@louisydom- iam a realtor who rhymes so iam way past the prime … flattered to be called young will rembr this advice till i have no teeth to grind 😛 cheers!!!
@glad u liked it aparna
@notjeff – thanks…but they can also create as u do with ur wonderful comments.
@megz – thank u
@chris – thanks.
ok…The poem has a great rythm, but so far I am digging the idea opf a “foolosopher”…
Did you create that? I love it!
yes annie i made that name up for myself.
theres also a post i have written on it…. hope u enjoy that too.
thanks and Cheers!!!
oh heres that post https://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/08/21/foolosophy/
Cheers!!!
indeed words are words, but it is we who define them…
very different write… beautifully penned
http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/09/thursday-poets-rally-beautiful-morn.html
thank u rajlaxmi.. will read urs write away.
cheers!!!
ah, what we speak, what we think, the words we are only responsible for..!
like the penmanship..!
mine for the rally is ~here~
how are you?
do you enjoy reading fresh poets?
please return favors to those who are here,
let me know after you are done 18 NEW ones.
😉
Happy Thursday!
jingle jingle
i have read many more than 18 i guess…dint comment on most of them for dint quiet understand their view (to be polite)
but many are amazing so i commented on them and i have even voted for shoelessboywonders post as a winner 😀
happy thursday to you iam already in happy friday 😀
awesome!
since u have two entries, please read and comment for more,
in general, we give comments to encourage,
honesty is important, but we are doing it for fun, thus simply say, good job, welcome to my page, u can leave your 2nd entry in their post so that they return favors…W:https://wiserskydiver.wordpress.com/2010/09/11/iam-not-afraid/
ayi ayi capitan … all hands on deck 😀
So lovely poem here… First time and I loved your poem… Your words are well defined…
Happy Rally…
Sweet Dish
–Someone Is Special–
thank u special one 😀
cheers!!!
Loved this, and sums up everything about words wonderfully. Words sure can hurt too.
thanks jessica …but i differ with sums up everything… cause words are projections of ur imaginations and they can never be summed up 😛 Cheers!!!
Words like water, clear or muddy, drops or streams, gentle or fierce – their meanings defined both by the sayer and the listener – never the same… I also think about them a lot. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, I like it 🙂
thank u for the warm words…
I think its nice
But the word “words” is mentioned 17 times I think its a bit too much 🙂
The variation in the language is a relief to the eye, which after a while just skips “words” altogether 🙂
will keep that in mind the next time… thanks
do read the second entry to the rally too
Ah, that love affair with words: all poets must own it if we are to write anything worthwhile. Bravo.
thank u for ur encouragement…. 😀
Very interesting. (:
My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/
thank u
if they shaped by her lips
then its my divine plan
liked these lines a lot! very good writing, you have a way with taking words mashing them together and then rolling them out into one meaning, then doing it again and coming up with another. i like it. take care – keep writing!
thanks and glad u enjoyed the trip…..
Cheers!!!
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Lovely rhyme;
words so blunt that make dents
if they shaped by my lips
then its my punishments
thank u 😀
Cheers!!!
hmmm good one.