gorgeous piped piper…. part deux

Posted: September 6, 2010 in loved ones
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Sitting by the sea

the waves hitting the shore and the suns about to set

having her sit beside me and make wonderful music

that echoes like piped pipers

the music that distracts me from those god like eyes

shes happy for the first time

since that time

I am lost in this music

Melancholic pipers

Gorgeous dreamful pied pipers

Her giggles echo through all sad waves

Making this sea side a resonating garden of blooms

Taking form of a performance in a renaissance room

I am just swaying like a flower in the winds of her laughter

I like it today for shes happy for the very first time since that time.

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Comments
  1. Kavita says:

    Woohoo… this is like PURE ROMANCE!
    Good stuff! Dreamy and sweet…

  2. Jingle says:

    love music,
    the image is super cute and playful…

  3. Jingle says:

    Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck!
    Cheers!

  4. Jingle says:

    Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck!
    Cheers
    :0

  5. buttercup600 says:

    I was lost in your words from beginning to end!! So very romantic!! Thanks for linking with Potluck, your support are so much appreciated!!

  6. Jingle says:

    the image is very vivid illustration…sweet of you to support…
    Happy monday!

  7. buttercup600 says:

    Back again my friend…just love that you link….I am just swaying like a flower in the winds of her laughter…these words are the most beautiful I have heard EVER xxx Hugs xx

  8. penelopephoebe says:

    This is a truly poignant and romantic poem. I just love the line, “I am just swaying like a flower in the winds of her laughter”. The poem makes you want to learn more about the two characters; drawing you into their lives. Well done:>)

  9. 2zpoint says:

    That sounds like a time that is the making for more than a memory.

  10. Heart says:

    Hmmm.. Who could have thought of giving Pied Piper a romantic angle..?! Nice try and it works.. Lovely and I bet, he got the girl in the end! Like happy endings!!
    šŸ™‚

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