shes not yet opened her eyes….

Posted: August 23, 2010 in Romance

i have been in her arms
in the day and in the night
felt was i blessed to deserve this charm
see her face when shes sleeping like an angel
smile so beautiful that the rising sun makes no light
cause she has not yet opened her eyes
cloudy is the wind today for it has rained
it shall vanish when she blinks her eyes

the day starts better when she says ” u woke-up already”
wishing this moment to stick somewhere in the tides of space
wanting more of this strange morning to last like a birds flight
gliding slowly high up in the warm winds as the softness of her grace

smile that makes my day like a light on the darkside of my night
always knowing will be by my side in strength and love
sadness and blunt times holding me in her sweet sight
never letting those eyes waver around but pointing to the confident in me
having all these doubts cause she has not yet opened her eyes

  1. I love the devotion in your work. Very nice.

  2. Jingle says:

    super emotional and intense love.

  3. Jingle has the word: Intense. All that awaits because her eyes will open. How the person’s day depends totally on her. Kind of scary, that kind of love, so dependent on one person – but perhaps she feels the same?

    Found you at Jingle. Thanks for linking! Amy Barlow Liberatore

  4. Rashmi says:

    Beautiful poem.It seems that the words are not enough to show your lov efor her..

  5. Olivia says:

    ooooh.. so romantic.. very beautifully written!!
    Seems one is viewing a lovely fairy tale.. very well written..
    Best.. xx

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